Seb your climbing injuries highlights a good example of a mountaineering disaster. However to improve the grade from a PASS to a merit you need to make some ammendments. You might want to consider researching an additional accident or injury. You will also need to explain a little better how the injuries could have been avoided. e.g. better assessment of the weather, more appropriate selection of mountaineers, better radios and equipment.
CULVERHAY SCHOOL Department of Physical Education NATIONAL CERTIFICATE PUBLIC SERVICES (LEVEL 3) UNIT 18 “OAA”
NAME: Seb Noad
Assessment Criteria DEPTH
COMMENT Not Demonstrated Basic Demonstration Detailed Demonstration Comprehensive Demonstration Pupils take part in all activities X Pupils can highlight the relevant safety equipment X Pupils can use safety equipment properly X Pupils act in a safe manner X Pupils follow advice of ski/kayak/climbing instructors X Pupils can use various safety procedures i.e. belay, knots, spray deck X Pupils when questioned were aware of the relevance to public services X Pupils show a positive attitude to activities x Overall comments/Suggestions for improvement: Seb you have performed brilliantly throughout the practical activities and have shown a real understanding of the different activities. However you can only achieve the merit grade because you missed several kayaking lessons. Overall Grade: M
Safet in climbing work is again very good seb. Well researched and well done finding the three posters. DISTINCTION.
ReplyDeleteSeb your climbing injuries highlights a good example of a mountaineering disaster. However to improve the grade from a PASS to a merit you need to make some ammendments. You might want to consider researching an additional accident or injury. You will also need to explain a little better how the injuries could have been avoided. e.g. better assessment of the weather, more appropriate selection of mountaineers, better radios and equipment.
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ReplyDeleteDepartment of Physical Education
NATIONAL CERTIFICATE
PUBLIC SERVICES (LEVEL 3)
UNIT 18
“OAA”
NAME: Seb Noad
Assessment Criteria DEPTH
COMMENT
Not Demonstrated Basic Demonstration Detailed Demonstration Comprehensive Demonstration
Pupils take part in all activities X
Pupils can highlight the relevant safety equipment X
Pupils can use safety equipment properly X
Pupils act in a safe manner X
Pupils follow advice of ski/kayak/climbing instructors X
Pupils can use various safety procedures i.e. belay, knots, spray deck X
Pupils when questioned were aware of the relevance to public services X
Pupils show a positive attitude to activities x
Overall comments/Suggestions for improvement:
Seb you have performed brilliantly throughout the practical activities and have shown a real understanding of the different activities. However you can only achieve the merit grade because you missed several kayaking lessons.
Overall Grade: M
Signed Greig SEavill Date 01/03/12